Rivision

In order to avoid a paper covered in red correction ink, my revision process includes a few different steps. First, after I write a paper, I put it away. After working hard on the writing process, my eyes need a break from the sentences I that have already reworked about five or six times. Then when I bring it back out, I move entire paragraphs around and put everything in order. I insert words and change phrases to make sure things flow easily from the readers eyes to the readers mind with out speed bumps. To describe my revision process I would say I am a pediatrician. Because I fix the whole paper, but I make sure I am nice to my paper, which hopefully doesn't need much fixing.